Tayari's Blog: "Evangeline": A Book I Wrote a Long Time Ago

Posted by TayariJones on September 16, 2005 12:07 PM
Filed under Writing

When I was about twenty-three, I wrote a novel called "Evangeline." It was about a twenty-something named Fern who was from Evangeline, Louisiana. The plot was that she had come to Atlanta, determined to make a new life for herself.

The action of the novel is that she has to come home for her sister's wedding. The whole novel is about two hundred pages with a pretty large font and generous margins. I remember how accomplished I felt when I finished it. I remember how the pages smelled-- warm and damp from my dot matrix printer! I remember my stonach cramps when my boss said, "Someone came in the office over the weekend and made two thousand copies!"

I discovered a copy of "Evangeline" in my basement and I looked it over. Lord, it's a mess. There are at least seven point-of-view characters and they all talk like they know that they are in a book. I am glad that I wrote it before the glory days of self-publishing. Ha ha. I probably would have sent it to iUniverse and been selling it out of my trunk. (I'm joking, but not really.)

An editor at Simon and Shuster wanted to see it. I gave it to her, and she politely told me that it wasn't ready for publication. But she did tell me that she thought that I would be a fine writer when I was older. And you know what, that was enough for me. I put "Evangeline" away without any sadness, and tried again.

I am not quite sure what the moral of this story is, but I think there's something in it worth sharing.

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Comment #1, by STEPHANIE

IF AT FIRST YOU DON'T SUCCEED....

September 16, 2005 02:23 PM

Comment #2, by Nichelle Tramble

Tayari---

My first 20-year old novel was called "Black Pearls" and I can't even get through it without cringing. I think the point was getting all the way to THE END for the very first time.

Nichelle

September 16, 2005 02:59 PM

Comment #3, by XENIA

My first novel as an amateur writer was a cross between the classic film "Boys Town" starring Spencer Tracy & Mickey Rooney, and Mark Twain's "Huckleberry Finn." I didn't know anything about plagarism back then. I think I was younger than 21, though.

Moral of the story: Sometimes rejection is good thing.

September 16, 2005 10:43 PM

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